My comfort food 영작도와주세요.

학생질문)

My comfort food is Buldak Ramen.
Buldak Ramen is an instant noodle that is spicy and tasty.
The spicy taste makes me forget my stress.
I also love the heat from the capsaicin.
To make Buldak Ramen, you just boil the noodles and add the sauce.
The spicy taste helps me forget all my stress.
One day, I had an English exam and didn't do well on it.
I had a bad day at school and felt really stressed out.
So, my friend and I went to the supermarket.
I ate two packs of Buldak Ramen so that I could relieve my stress.
After eating, I felt much better.It made all of our stress go away that day.
1. 어법에 어긋나거나 자연스럽지 않은 문장 고쳐주세요
2.사역동사가 들어간 5형식 문장인지
3. 접속사 so that이 들어간 문장이 올바른지 봐주세요. 부탁드려요

 

선생님답변)

My comfort food is Buldak Ramen.

It’s an instant noodle that is spicy and tasty.

The spicy flavor makes me forget my stress.

I also love the heat from the capsaicin.

To make Buldak Ramen, you just boil the noodles and add the sauce.

One day, I had an English exam and didn’t do well.

I had a bad day at school and felt really stressed out.

So, my friend let me eat Buldak Ramen so that I could feel better.

I even made my friend eat it with me so that we could relieve our stress together.

I ate two packs of Buldak Ramen, and after eating, I felt much better.

It made all of our stress go away that day.

 

자연스럽게 문장고쳐가며 사역동사가 들어간 5형식문장과 so that 이

들어간 문장으로 교정했으니 다시 잘 읽어보고 외워보세요.^^